More lessons from Beautiful Demons
A few observations: attacks happen seemingly constantly . It's almost too much in my opinion -- there is very little breathing room -- but I tend to have the exact opposite problem; too much breathing room. So, it is good to study this. When POV characters are attacked, it is seemingly random... ...but it very much is not actually random . Cannon's villains have already all devised their own plans and are executing them. The main cast pieces those plans together as they go. Whenever my stories were starting to feel slow and clogged, I instantly went "yeah...make something blow up" which is fine as an instinct, but the attacks were feeling disjointed. I'm more of a plotter than a pantser, so I am now going back to the drawing board. The antagonist's plans need to be fully defined and executed so that way everything starts to connect. I will say that the books do tend to weaken slightly in what is effectively this series' "war chapters" (tha...